The Journey of a Serpent - Reviews

Not a minute had passed since he began searching for them inside the meadow,  and the first ghost appeared. An orc was standing in front of him, he had a massive mace on his right hand, and twisted fangs coming out from his lower mouth. He was certain it was a ghost because the orc had a silver outline and seemed translucent, the air around the shepherd had gone cold in a second.

After several left and right,he showed me the hall,counselling,where the soldiers fight,their rooms,the doctor,where the maids live and finally we are in the kitchen.

Sanchi flicked her fingers infront of Sanskaar's face, which jerked him back to the present.

" Baiklah aku setuju " kata Raiser cepat yang melupakan kalau Shiro telah memukulnya sebelumnya.

Waaaaaay too much gay going on in here. The MC is a beta dropkick and I wouldn't be surprised if he eventually awakens the "ballsack sucking" ability within the first 20 chapters. If man love is your thing, try it. If not, find a new novel.

Fantastic work! The writing feels genuine, crafted with great quality and so do the characters. The story flow is also very, very smooth. I wish you the best in your future endeavors!

So far the story is going super well, it's fluid and entertaining, it seems like the wait for new chapters seems like an eternity. I recommend it, it's a 10/10. I can't wait for the next chapters.

Good story but would love to know how they look like