The Jasmine Scented White Moonlight - Reviews

"Hey don't worry about me I'm not sad at all, after all it had to end one day. I know that you all wanted to matchmake us but we are not meant for each other."  

This is actually a down side to his semblance. Because he wasn't raised the same way as Naruto or how he doesn't have Naruto's bloodline or mental fortitude, Magna can't handle the malice from the kyuubi. Even though the kyuubi inside Magna is only a memory, the memory also contains all the urges Kurama used to influence Naruto. This allowed Magna to realise that there could be abilities that affect him.

-My mistake ...- Midoriya smiled nervously.

With the guidance of the king and the strongest swordsman in the world, the hero trained day and night to defeat the [demons] that was slowly marching towards the kingdom.  

However, something troubled both parents. While Lou Zhong could articulate and speak baby with his sister, he would not speak actual words. No matter how either tried to tempt him, he would not utter either the words Baba or Mama. Instead he would look at anyone who tried with a haughtily raised eyebrow before turning his head up in disdain.

Never!                        Never!

This is great. It's rare to see a mecha novel but it reminds me of a game I used to play called Front Mission 3. Nostalgia came in as I read through it. World building is good, plot is also fast so it's not boring to read. Keep wrirting and improving. Looking forward to reading more of it soon.

How is this not popular LOLi rate it 4.8. i would give a five all thats missing is a little Writing Quality.But this is One of my favorites.

Need more chapters ?? so bad dudee story has so much potential I don't know if orginal or translated but it needs more chapters my boy Ethan finally reached the village now what????? Mannn  I can't wait for next part come soon me missing u