Good read so far. I hope their aren't any mind games, doubts, or immature behaviour. Please do not drag out the book, too. Good job so far, I am at chapter 8.
The sheer amount of dumb and contradiction by chapter 8 just made it to much. I bet it gets better down the line but what happens around ch8 makes me wana make a face like the one they did in "soul eater" Whenever excalibur got mentioned
