The Horror Stories Of Food - Reviews

Get ready for round 2. *smirk ? ?

Sejeong memutar bola matanya malas. "Ya Allah, Niel... untung lagi sakit lo."

"just to be clear, do you have some kind of transportation methods like a carriage or something?"

"ဆရာပိုင္လင္း ခင္ဗ်ားကေတာ့ သိပ္ၿပီး ႀကီးႀကီးမားမား အျပစ္မရွိလွဘူး။ ဒါေပမယ့္ ခင္ဗ်ားက ေရွးေဟာင္းပစၥည္းေတြ စိတ္ဝင္စားတယ္။ အဲ့ေတာ့ ေက်ာင္းသားေတြဆီကေန ေရွးေဟာင္းပစၥည္းေတြ လာဘ္ယူတယ္။ က်ဳပ္ထင္တာ မမွားဘူးဆိုရင္ ခင္ဗ်ားဝတ္ထားတဲ့ ေရွးေဟာင္းေက်ာက္စိမ္းလက္စြပ္က ေက်ာင္းသားတေယာက္ဆီကေန သူ႕ေတာင္းဆိုမႈကို လိုက္ေလ်ာေပးထားလို႔ ရထားတာမလား။ ဘယ္ေက်ာင္းသားလဲ ဘာေတာင္းဆိုတာလဲဆိုတာ အေသးစိတ္ ဆက္ေျပာဖို႔လိုေသးလား? "

Jinbei was running for his life from a group of guards who were firing on him and shouting at him to stop

"Nate!" Mr. Gio yelled at me. "What are you still doing at your locker? Class started over five minutes ago!"

I was gonna cover myself with my hands but he prevented me.

"then let's go in." the crown prince immediately said. He then turned and walk inside as if nothing had happend. Yuki followed him from behind and gave Ye Lin a slight glance. She saw his face look surprise from what Ye Ruo's action towards him.

And suddenly the blue color of the potion of kindnesd turned into a dark purple.

The story is interesting, being action-packed from the get go. The characters face a different type of apocalypse, which is a nice welcome because nobody said that the apocalypse had to only involve zombies, right?  There are some grammatical errors and the flow of the story is good. There were some areas that got me confused, but it's a fictional story lol. But on a serious note, I don't think it was wise to make a whole lot of noise when the enemy is most likely close by. Regardless of my review, go read the story and see if you like it.

I know this question is dumb but Why would he need to grow as a person when 'he's' a dungeon core? It's like asking a donkey to become a better lion?. Also that paragraph that supposed to be hyping the story always crack me up, I mean "Evil gods introduced new species that have the ability to change the world! will the so called righteous god allow? or nah?" or something so obvious like this?

as the author i will rate my book 5 stars..support me and your will never regret it.