The Heir Mafia Boss - Reviews

It kept me interested enough that I couldn't stop reading until the end.

awesome book to read. I cried n it gave me goosebumps. love it . ❤

This is great read..

considering ur name, i assume you've already read Reverend Insanity

then there's Lord of The Mysteries, and its sequel, Circle of Inevitability (both on par with RI)

and the classic, The Legendary Mechanic (has a bit of info dump here and there, but its f*ck*ng awesome)

At c119, the plot is dull and boring, not much is happening, 1d characters. The biggest issue is with MC, he is just so damn nice, he lives in cultivation world, but he doesn't scheme, he doesn't plot and it seems everyone else is almost as nice as mc, his and everyone else nice guy attitude is truly sickening.
There are little to no world building, descriptions of any kind(world, characters, appearances etc) are sparse. Once again characters are 1d characters, there seems to be no other motivation that drives them apart from being nice. Why are they nice? No one knows, they just are!
There seems to romantic subplot developing(and mc getting even nicer), it is generic and feels like main arc (because the actual main arc is just weak and may not even exist). It feels like this will be another novel where mc can't take a step outside without his romantic interest contantly following him around.
I will give it another 50 chapters, if I don't see any improvement I will have to drop it.

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Cute. But the tags is indeed correct

It's not bad.  Yes, it's a wuxia novel with a veneer of sci-fi but it's actually works and the author didn't dragged the story out with worthless fillers.  Author also did a good job showing how a normal human slowly becomes a killing machine.  The MC isn't a psychopath that goes on a killing spree just after getting a bit of power.

Ele fica assim por mais ou menos quantos capítulos? Atualmente estou quando acompanha a Sarah Welton. Quanto tempo até voltar ao Jamie?

The story and plot itself is good, but I don't like how the author potrays the female characters. . . I believe those characters are made with the purpose to look like those cliche and goofy-ish anime/manga girls(?) but they sound rather annoying and disturbing. Sometime I just gotta take deep breath and convince myself to not give a shit bout' them. Unfortunately I find them too annoying to just ignore and ends up swearing too much lol.

One more!! I'm so frustrated by how they keep making the female character (with chances to be in his harem or in a relationship) flustered at almost every single moment. Like. . . cant u fucking stop stutering? That sounds incredibly annoying

conclusion: Story and plot ??ok
How they write the female Character ??

thrilling story