The Greatest Magician (HIATUS) - Reviews

Guards walked in with a girl linked around each arm. Her feet dragging along the carpet as they throw her down to her knees.

"Your magic, Shiro," he calmly spoke.

"How weird?"

"Yes, your majesty" Kira and Alex then followed behind Zeno, while the remaining two stayed.

"Finally, the torment is over, now where is that Derek?

Damn...this FF is good & i really like it.....haiz..sad..so sad man.

Suddenly, all the invaders from the soldier to leviathan keel over and begin to shake, then abruptly stop moving. They all fall over. Still looking up to the portal, Natasha is unsure if Stark will make it through in time. Still holding the scepter in hand, she shifts around, waiting, whispering. ''Come on, Stark...''

My name is Renard and I am a soldier, a guard.  At 19 I don't have much to my name.  Iv never done something that people would talk about.  I've never been heroic or anything like that.  I served as a common foot soldier and by a stroke of lucky I got my current job.  I guard the princess of our great kingdom, well I'm one of her guards.  Unfortunately for me she is a spoiled little brat.  

But there was one who saw and understand what happened.

Suddenly a few more people appeared in the arena but this time it was the elders. Ren was among them and he quickly went to his son. There were three elders, including Ren and all of them had an imposing aura but Lucifer faced them with a leisure smile.

Well, what can I say except good job author. Although there are some minor pro here and there, that doesn't deter the excitement to read. So keep going author, and just keep updating steadily.

It's like watching youku dramas, I love it, keep the chapters coming.