The Gray Ranger: Unforgiven - Reviews

" Greetings Heroes! Welcome to Luspel Kingdom." A middle-aged man said as he walks towards them. He wore a crown on his head completely made of gold.

Oops ! forgot to tell u about my family . ...My dad and Mom are like the diehard lovers and worst enemies . They fight and love eachother to the extremes ...they are like crazy ...

As I'm standing there mesmerised looking around me at the amazing view of a rising sun shedding it's red light over the blue-green grass. But then I notice something missing, wasn't Goba supposed to be here?

Bryce shrugged off the hand, giving his friend a glare.  "Did I ask you?"

"No, not really. I never heard Ciel say anything about him and I never bothered learning of him." I said, and only now that I realized that this was a bit weird. I never really cared much as any prince was always a son of the Emperor to me and Ciel was always more of a brother than all my other brothers so I didn't really think about that at all.

  Tian Jiahao continued to beg saying " If you were not a great master with divine Qi, I would be able to sense your power as I am a Initiate 3rd stage spiritual cultivator"

So far, your story seems really good. I truly appreciate your hard work. It was meant to be a slice-of-life and romance show, and here I was, hoping for a fight scene—silly me. But then you gave me some hope by showing a glimpse of werewolf and human strength. Now I want to know the mystery behind those four (...spoiler...) things that everyone is after. So, don’t give up! How will sarah defeat them ?

Definitely a unique story, the plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. Will keep reading.

good but many mistakes hope you improve.

I like your writing style it was not rushed. It was like fresh air, you can visualized your story unfolding. More power author-san.