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The Girl Kereese Mcpherson And Her Story
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She sighed as she looks at the man before her.
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"Yay! Tibbers! I found him!" Annie shouted with joy as Mizuki felt a shadow loom over him. He looked up and the last sight he saw was a flaming teddy bear, the monstrous fluff toy opened its mouth and decapitated Mizuki's head from his shoulders with a single bite. The Chunin's blood sprayed through the air before falling on the ground around Naruto, Ashe, and Annie. His body twitched once before going limp. Annie walked over to the body and kicked it slightly. "Beaten by a little girl. Hehehe," she giggled before Tibbers faded back into an ordinary teddy bear. Annie grabbed him while Ashe put her bow over her shoulders. Both moved over to Naruto.
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"Ehh? Don't be! I killed him after all!"
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Only shooting stars break the mold
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Can someone tell me a novel with a similar concept to this one MMmH
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There's 3 factors here that made the review 3.4. Firstly the story development, followed by the character design and world background. The introduction for the opening chapter was not that great of a start. I was expecting something to happen as he got into the woods but the author made it look very ordinary. Atleast put some stray animals there or something that could intrigue your readers. In concludsion, it was very normal, just a kid with superhuman strength. Some dialogue flows unnaturally. Most scenes was rushed. The cuts per chapter needs a lot of improvement. Character design, there was nothing unique, plain and simple. World background... this is the most lacking. The story can be waited out for about 20-30 more chapters before the final verdict.
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Saw someone drop a review so HERE I AM.You can read that flipin dude (2nd review) to get more indepth but, without spoiling too much for ya, all i say is,  THIS IS DARK MHA. like frAll the things that orignal left out is probably going to be in it. . .(dark theme confirmed by author)As for mc (jin) i personally think he is more of a thomas shelby, OP but suffering with his own internal battles and problem.- He is a isekai hitman. (no he is not nerfed, like realisticaly )- There are lot of non canon things (crime and stuff)- Focusing on intresting side characters.-Deku will has his different journey, so we get 2 in 1There are already some signs of what he will cover and it becomes pretty clear with that note in chapter 12 or somewhere near, you can read it, it won't spoil anything.All in all, i think it's one of the best dark- action MHA fanfic WITH THE WORST UPDATE (4-6)---- JUST DO IT,  f perfection.Although most chapter are 4-5k too.
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such a lovely introduction, i like the male lead already and how good the narration is.

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