The First Mage - Reviews

Silver pointed his sword upward and then shout "FIERY BLADE" his blade is now releasing fire. He then started to slash and slash his sword and killing Wyverns with 3 hits. The combination of 3 way slashes and Fiery blade made him looked a killing machine.

"No."

Well, if I remember correctly in the game Hybrids or Beastmen are a special class that mixes humans with humanoid magical beings that have animal characteristics, generally all had species and type names, and it seems to be speed type. It was so silly it could be the killer class.

so, I didn't pat attention to the chapter count. was just looking for something to catch my interest. I couldn't put it down. loved every second of it. cried at the part in his mind space. and then bam!! it stopped at ch 22. I was like NOooooo!!!!  T_T   so sad. update more please. I'm fully addicted

Great plot. Interesting characters. Vampire romance stories are really close to my heart. But I just want to suggest to you author to check for grammar. They were just minors. But you can use some grammar-checker apps. It would help to improve a lot. Other than that, it's a great story with smooth pacing too.

The beginning is a bit complicated; your character quickly takes the initiative to embark on an adventure and change their life. However, I really like the direction the story is taking and the originality of the trials. ?