The First Alchemist - Reviews

The First Alchemist
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My opinion: this novel is great. I respect the author chugging thought and writing a chapter every few of days. So much of this start up writing and translation space bores me. This ambitious project brings something new. We will see how it pans out, only thing not changing is me tuning in The characters are believable and with the change in perspective of the writing, you can even understand them deeper.The techno side of things gives me something to look forward to) Plus the setting is pretty epic.My concerns. ( No a writer here )  -- with something ambitious-you will inevitably split the community. Maybe not 50-50, but some people will splinter. You have to have conviction to keep this book from becoming something you don't want to write anymore  -- the pace has to be right. Slow enough so we enjoy reading it, fast enough so it's not bogged down.To author, /ᐠ。ꞈ。ᐟ you're doing great.
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If you like a dark romance with a good plot and characters this one is an excellent romance, this is yours. I assure you it hits differently something new that you want to read till the end.
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What a great work! I'm really enjoying this author

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