The Female Alpha - Reviews

Shameless Review :DThis is my first book and there might be mistakes (which I try my best for it to not appear). The story might start off slow, but I wanted to take into account the actions of everyone(or every entity/organization) around him (protagonist). One chapter took me a lot of rewrites to get it logical. I also didn't want to info dump as that's just going to make you forget a lot of things.

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'Damn...' I go back into my body and the henchmen fall to the ground, passed out.

Sometime later Bunny, Toothfairy, and Sandman finally decided to show their faces. "As we are gathered here today, man in moon must have brought us some good news." North boomed.

"Oh thank you sir Rioy Kiyoshi I will do it."

Why did your former book get banned?????

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Love the story and all the characters thanks for updating their story!

The story's a simple one. Maybe even predictable. But it doesn't need to be a literary masterpiece. The story's simple nature is what keeps me coming back for more. MC's modus operandi is that if he can brute force it, he won't need to scheme, so he gets stronger, until he is strong enough to literally crush any and all opposition he faces.