The Feast - Reviews

Me parece bueno aunque espero que por lo menos ya le vayan poniendo aunque sea un poco de sentimientos románticos al porta si no se siente atascado lo cual me moldeará pero lo demás está muy bien.(no se si hay alguien más leyendo esto pero lo dejo por si acaso).

MMORPG : RISE  OF THE KING MMORPG : RISE  OF THE KING

Saya looked over towards her cousins and smiled. They were also wearing swimsuits and looked absolutely stunning.

I now believe in love, and soulmates. I know I have found mine and he was now everything to me. I shut the door, and I go upstairs happily skipping in my step. As if I was a silly teenager in love. I go into my room. For the first time in a while I felt peace, I lay myself down and close my eyes to find no sleep and a loud blaring alarm, a bright light that led to morning. No sleep great...

I check the time. I have completed my circular perimeter of six hundred feet on both sides with a ten foot opening in front for entering and exiting. I also leave a thirty foot opening in the back for access to the river. "Well for now I don't have any barbed wire so I will stick another log there." I don't have any nails so I cannot build anything complex. I need to go to that town again and scavenge for some nails when I finish this. I also want to build a gate here.

Slowly to the table, I walked "brains!"  I said, "I need BRAINS!!!"  As I walked to my seat and sat down. "Oatmeal or cereal," asked dad. "I request the oatmeal with apple and cinnamon chunks!!! Bring me my meal peasant!!!" I said in a haughty king like voice. "Yes yes my dear king right away." said my dad as he bowed. 2 minutes later my delectable meal of apple cinnamon oatmeal was brought to me. "After you eat put your dishes in the sink." "okay when will you be back" "I'll be getting you from school today." he said, "really that's awesome." I said as I finished up my food " I shan't keep you any longer off I go to get dressed and wash my face!" halfway to the bathroom dad yelled, "Honey your dishes!" I turned around and hit my knee on our old mahogany coffee table. "Owww why do I do this every day!!!"

After I finish speaking all that's left for me is to wait for my judgement. A tiny goblin like me having the chance for forgiveness of a being with the potential to leave this world and create a thriving world of his own, that in itself is an honor. Even if he doesn't forgive me and throws me in the endless pit, I'd be at peace.

"You love me" Joel winked and smiled charmingly my way.

Thats?it...

A really great read! I was really immersed with its world and how the characters feel they're real and alive—even though they're uh quite the opposite within the context of the story lol—after-alive rather lmao. The updates slowing down though is unfortunate, hopefully the author's doing well and taking the time to take care of themselves. Hoping as well they won't give up on this, because really, it's a great read. Keep up the good work!

Well written by the first chapter keep up the good work I cannot wait to keep reading this novel I can tell it’s going to get even better as the chapters go on