Excelente abordagem do tema da luta do bem contra o mal, o autor brinca bastante com temas teológicos e o poder divino baeado em milagres, entrando em choque com o senso comum de um mundo de fantasia baseado em mana, que é só mais uma equação
Pretty good start. Could use a bit of editing for smoother transitions. The story moves pretty quickly and I feel like I’m missing some background information on the characters. It could be brought in later chapters to make the story more well rounded. Other than that, keep up the good work author. This story has a lot of potential.
First 40ish chapters are a little slow because of the foundation being set up for the book, but after that it was amazing and I couldn’t stop reading until I caught up to the current chapter. Highly recommend giving this book a shot if you’re interested ???
