The Dance of Fates (A Percy Jackson Fanfic) - Reviews

When I was flailing around like an idiot I saw the shadow jump out of my open window. I ran after and looked out trying to get a glimpse of them so I could give a description to the police later but, there was no one there. Who ever was in my room vanished like a ghost.

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The clear mid court line

"Oh, Escanor. I spared your life and yet you still want to fight me. Guess it makes sense, your pride wouldn't let you live with that."

"Okay, nee-san." Sol said.

Shameless Author Review here. So I think this is my best work in terms of grammar as I've already written two other books and learned from them. The beginning is a bit enraging so it might not be for some people. The MC isn't meant to be an all-powerful being, but a spider that pulls strings from behind to get what he wants (Though he still fights a lot).Also, I already said this in the first chapter, but this story does use historical events but is not completely historically accurate. These historical events do come later in the novel though, so don't expect them too early. Uhhhhhh... I think that's it. Anyway, please enjoy my novel!

story is good and loves the character... although second awakening part pace is bit slow besides that... everything is good :)

I always appreciate a good read.. had me interested from the first couple of sentences for sure if you know what I mean since it seemed like someone was doing something naught those first couple sentences.. please keep updated it’s added to my library thanks for the hard work friend