The Daily Grind. - Reviews

Lv5 - Teacher

Just like that, another morning had started. Tian who wake up happily but Qin who woke up with worries.

"Ah yeah. My mom's a bit obsessed with these," said Namjoon as he patted the head of a little putto sculpture.

" What is it that you want withe me" - Caleb

Hanya orang dengan penglihatan yang sangat kuat yang bisa melihat bahwa sepertinya ada cahaya senter yang samar dalam baut petir pelangi.

i turns around see joy was pale i told him

Has potential, and is a _unique idea, and you seem dedicated and passionate about it, but I think some modifications are needed:1. Add some relevant tags. Almost no one on this platform is gonna read something that doesn't have at least a few tags. besides the platform won't push and spread it out if you don't set it. 2. I can't differ which text is for the system and which text is the narrative; I mean put the system on a format like a common one is just putting the system commands or prompts or status between '[ 'system' ] or something like that. keep it up!

so genderbending tag is turning a man into a woman? then would you add that "women" to harem? and with yuri tag, that "woman" will have "her way with the MC women,,,maybe some will not see yuri as netorar, but what if the soul of one of those women is a man who was genderbended??? i did not read the novel but stopped when I saw that tag, i hope to know the story if the genderbending tag to know if i could read the novel or not

Interesting novel. I really got hooked just by reading some few chapters. Really captivated and interesting . Keep updating more chapters ?

The reason behind this rating is pretty simple. The grammar is okay generally except for a few slip-ups. The novel itself has an interesting story line and world background. The problem is that firstly, it feels like I am reading a manga. That's how bad and immature most of the conversation seems. Like every girl will just throw themselves at the MC or show him kindness which is completely different from their character. As if the MC is the only one in the whole wide world who can catch a certain itch for them (?). The other thing is how are the siblings not willing to kill the guys who tried killing them? just beat them up? So if a pedo/rapist does something to your sibling you let them go with a little beating or something ? that's it? Are you even worthy of calling yourself their family?

So many things being hidden from the mc for idiotic reasons that could be talked about in a calm conversation, the author always forces the plot about the protagonist's women cheating on him, even though they aren't, it starts to get very annoying and unnecessary. Anyway, the story is very average and has some inconsistencies.