The Choice to be Human - Reviews

So what's wrong with taking the back streets?

"Oh Ifritz desu," respond my friend.

Bro at least put some +18 or adult or something and who can u write a 13 years old doing that ruined the story on chapter 6

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Bro, I love how you wrote the first chapter. You started with a bar and an adventure, and I love how you placed the characters. It hooked me and made me want to read the second chapter. Your writing is so good—keep it up! I hope one day your book gets more views and reaches its peak.

hi, nice chapters thanks.Please increase on the release ..oops it can't be helped.The story flow is nice and promising in my pov and please if possible include divine beings like Godesses,angels,.............. please

I like the storyline. Riley looks like a powerful woman. I like it because most story's FL are weak or emotional but Riley is stable and can stay by her own. She can fight for herself. The interaction with Sweven is also unique. I think he is the ML but I'm not sure. It's only 3 chapters and I want more.  I hope you will publish them in time. Waiting for Saturday to come?