The Betrayal's kiss - Reviews

From this height, it was possible to see the entirety of the ruined, ancient city—now dubbed Whiteshadow. The large buildings and huge towers that were piercing the sky testified of the glorious past of this ghost town. Unfortunately, they serve now as shelters for the monstrous magical creatures that populate the ravaged lands in the West of this continent.

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"Alright, honey. What are we eating tonight, dear?"

After that, one month passed.

Spinning Compressed Mana Sphere (ACTIVE)

Team 101 galloped through the streets of Kumamoto to catch the mischievous Light and Teru.

Cilan chose his Pansage and Burgundy her Oshawott.

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Pretty good read tbh seems promising so far, pretty good writing, the ‘rank infos’ auxiliary chapter made me feel like I should redo mine lol