Okay, so far, this one is pretty decent, but I really can't with the dialogue.Most are just too unnatural. Unbearable almost. At times it's good, but in others? Not so much. (Maybe it's just me, I don't know.)A lot of the nicknames are downright cringe, same for how some situations play out. In general, it just feels like a kid dreamed this up, thinking that it was how Mafia bosses acted.But, aside from all of that, the story itself is fun and the writing is better than the average novel on WN. It has mistakes here and there, but those are easily ignored.I can see some obvious effort behind this, which makes me root for the author. Good luckTLDR: It's a fun novel that you shouldn't look too deep into. 3.8/5