The Archman Saga(Hiatus) - Reviews

Going to the second floor with Kurihara-san, I approached the unconscious Solange-san. Then I poked her with the handle of the mop I brought to make sure. I poked her boob obviously.

"I want to train in Tenrou Island" said Cram.

Right now, somewhere... hell, probably, had a small girl in a chair. "Tsk, annoying paladin, if that kid had more devils blood in him I would have shattered his damn avatar to pieces..... to think Arius would think so highly of him to bring a treasure to help destroy my avatar. Why would he spend so much on a kid with devils blood, anyways? Does he want to make use of it? Has he finally... started experimenting with black magic and evil? AHAHAHAAHA! To think even the most righteous paladin would have fell like this. What a joke."

Armada:"..."

I said yep what a concept

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He he’s doing rose wrong he needs to accept Her she’s going crazy

Great concept for a novel. BUT, there are multiple instances of the author either not explaining what is happening or repeating events multiple times but changing how it happened, describing things differently, or adding and subtracting details. I read the same thing 3 times, just written slightly differently each time.

so far so good, hope it continues. keep it up ?

It’s an intriguing story with well written characters. I highly recommend it.