The Alpha’s Betrayal : Running with his Heir - Reviews

"AAHHH!!!" namjoon and the others heard. "did you hear that?" jimin asked him. "yeah, what was it?" he responded back. "it sounded like a girl.." jin said turning to namjoon. hoseok gasped, "what if it's a human girl?! we have to save her then!" hoseok said and starting to quickly swim away from them to find the human. he hurriedly swam towards the scream of the girl. jimin and jungkook started to swim after hoseok, "i'm going with hoseok to find the scream of the girl." jimin said.

Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running

Kai: When was it that I took a stroll like that. Most of the time I was so busy noticing anything.

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

Read what was free for a reference point. Author needs to go back and edit his earlier chapters. I don’t know how you can forget your own characters names. Wish that their was more world building going on even if it’s not know to the MC as the reader it helps with knowing if the story will be to their liking. MC at times seems to have different personalities and switches thought processes. Didn’t really fight a whole lot in the first phase even with all those warning so I was a little disappointed. Was hoping for an attack on the settlement to see the defenses in action. The whole shelter as a skill is kinda unique, wish the story fleshed out a bit more in the free chapters but good luck to the author and hope the update stability doesn’t drop

Throughout the myriad and abundant novels I've read , this has made it into the top ten. A book among books.A story among stories. The human nature aspect in the novel reminds me of solo leveling.

Good story and power concept of the beast. I like your writing styles and world building. But maybe you can explain more about MC goals. Keep it up!

author i have a suggestion rather than making mc too op why not have him summon a living armor and no i don't mean a armor with sentience but a armor than moves on it's own but is empty in the inside so mc can just stay inside and have the armor as his bodyguard which would move on it's own or a golem with a proper place inside for mc to sit inside kinda like a mecha but the golem moves on it''s own i think they are good options for summons that would make it so that mc won't be a glass cannon while still being a summoner

A great book , the first 25 chapter hook me up, it has a lot of potential, great grammar, interesting characters design . Looking forward for more chapters.

Keep Up The Good Works. I'm Fascinated By The World Building .... Especially The Ability To Jump Between Worlds After Death. Tasty.