It's a good framework for a story, if not a little goofyPros:- Very descriptive writing, I can picture it like an anime in my head- First chapter has an interesting hook- Character designs (when they are described) are cool, like the boy in chapter 3Cons:- The chapters seem quite disconnected from each other (but maybe you have plans to tie them together in the future?)- The random romance in chapter 2 seems a little unnecessary- Reads like a creepypasta at some points
