Truly a captivating story. Your story is far mysterious, which makes me curious. There's this secret organization and inheritance stuff, it will catch the interest of the cultivation reader's interest.
This book is honestly amazing. It has so much potential to be an all timer. The plot is slow initially but it’s because of the world building and setting the themes. But once it picks up it’s amazing. Good read so far. Keep it up ! And the action scenes are some of the best I’ve seen
The blend of satire and introspection makes for an engaging read. However, the balance between humor and the deeper, more serious themes could be refined to maintain a consistent tone.
