Summoner - Reviews

''52...it should be enough. I guess it's time for a complete purge!'' His eyes shone determinedly as he undressed and entered the small lake.

His quick feats of strength and speed in battle were something so intriguing to Ziro because that's exactly what he wanted to be. If he was too slow a magic caster would cast a spell to hit him directly and he would be gone in seconds. If he wasn't strong enough he would be crushed by monsters bigger than him. If he didn't think fast enough he would be dead without even noticing a rogue bandit behind him. These thoughts clouded his mind and he learned from it, even putting scenarios in his head of him fighting legendary beasts such as minotaurs and ogres to see how he would react in those situations.

Only shooting stars break the mold

You'll never shine if you don't glow

She blinked at him, her face flashing her usual color. "What do you mean?" She asked with an eyebrow raised and acting completely innocent.

Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?

Im interested for sure. There is definitely face slapping, but it is done in a really believable way that im really enjoying. The system makes sense, and while I do wish it was explained a little more what certain things mean and how they work, its not affecting the story and of things are explained too much it would actually be a demerit since it would cut into immersion. As it stands, it's well balanced and really enjoyable. I suspect that if it remains on this level moving forward, the story will quickly become one of my favorites. Nicely done.