Submitting - Reviews

it's good. i added it in my library. like it

very good author.. but please keep updating and lets know how it goes

You are inspiring me a lot to become a writer, you truly deserve to be called the best author you have explained each situation and POV of characters very well go for it author your a magic itself ?

has me anticipating if she will get caught, is it a set up. don't leave me hanging for so long

dang, 3 people voted this 1 star. Guess I'll skip it then

Can someone give me a little spoiler about how he sees Saloma or whatever her name is, she will be his future wife because I'm going through chapter 300 and I think she will be his wife and I really hope that doesn't happen, I don't like her very much.

All it took for me to start this was the "unreliable narrator" tag. Updating in about 50 chaps to see if it's truly good.
Modify*NVM I LOVE IT ALREADY

Uh. I feel like I’ve been deceived. There was never anything in the synopsis about the MC being in the mafia ;-;                           

It's pretty much a standard cultivation story with a lot of tech and scifi jargon to make it appear futuristic. For a webnovel, its decently written.The genetic system/chain is like acupoints and meridians. the country is your sect, contribution points are the same, instead of demonic cultivators, there are aliens. There are various interests groups and clans. It's not bad, as a futuristic cultivation novel.As for the nationalism/racism, if you are the type of reader who takes it personally, skip this. The U.S. and their EU lackeys have long been adversaries of China, and India and China have had territorial/border disputes for years.I'm not surprised a chinese author would develop a novel with antagonists that mirror real life. It gets to be over the top at points, but if you are able to gloss over that, this is a mildly entertaining story.

awesome story.. i loved this it's a good story so far it looks like it has a lot of potential, i hope he won't drop it.well.. it's not that much different from cultivation novels, still a little unique.

I've been searching for this type of novel about game designers.. and I like how you did on this one where the MC was reincarnated in a world without games unlike other Novel or Fanfic ?? suggested game Undertale

The way you started with your story is quite interesting - it makes people want to keep reading to see what happens next. This is a good romance book! Keep up the good work Author!