Submissiv system - Reviews

After carefully decoding his little one's queries, Rogue nodded and gifted them with a reassuring purr. Although he was anxious beyond his own understanding, the last thing the titan wanted was for his incredibly venerable humans to worry about him. Recalling the day a year ago, where his two tiny companions had quizzed him on things that he didn't have the knowledge of, Rogue felt himself twinge. He had been so upset because no matter how much he loved his little ones and wanted to answer their questions, he simply couldn't because he truly had no idea. The titan had no recognition of his past either; the memory was just a black void in his mind. Of course, although it sometimes troubled him, he hated to see his humans or little ones vexed about his wellbeing. As big as he was, he was more than capable to take care of himself. His miniscule companions, not so much.

Tiempo después su vista nublosa poco a poco se aclaró un dolor intenso de cabeza lo ataco por lo que se te toco las sienes por reflejo un olor suave a menta lleno su nariz, al tocarse la mejilla aún tenía una sensación de ardor combinada con una sensación refrescante, sus dedos estaban empapados de un líquido viscoso al olerlo de cerca noto que esto era lo que olía a menta, levanto la mirada y vio una escena increíble un combate mano a mano se estaba llevando a cabo entre Jayce y Violet, aunque la fuerza y resistencia de esa niña era muy superior a la de Jayce podía ver que su agilidad combinada con sus golpes la estaban poniendo en un aprieto, el sudo empapa su suave rostro, gotitas rodaban desde su hermosa dorada cabellera hasta caer por su mentón sus movimientos aunque toscos combinado con su suave figura daba una sensación revitalizadora.

Even when I tried to open the window with the key, the key didn't move. It was probably sealed with something like instant adhesive.

"So now you want created another masterpiece?" Jester asked.

Its good the dialogs the characters and the scenes are executed nicely, the power system is kinda new like the word essentia its like they are mutants or they all have one special abilities the naming sense is also good , it's a really good read. Keep it up Author. Im rooting for you.

بداية جيدة للغاية واشجعك علي اكمال روايتك اولا لديهاا مستقبل مبهر اولا يجب التركيز علي تعديل العالمم وتاريخه ثم تبدأ بصنع الشخصيات الرئيسية والحركة وباقي الاشياء الاخرى

I'm enjoying this book xoxo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please keep on posting I'm up to date, let's support the author I just checked your Instagram @jae_05vy!!!!!!!!!!

Five minutes in and I'm already hooked?this is so good I can't even begin to explain how captivating the beginning is I'll tag this book so others can read it.

The premise is interesting! Maybe adding more world-building details could make it even better."Loving the characters so far! Hoping to see some deep development as the story progresses