Stigma: World of Gods

A good read overall.The premise is nice, and I especially liked the begining. The grammar is definitely better than a lot of novels I've read here, and it shows potential.I like the suspense that the story builds up from the start too.All in all, I'm rooting for Luke.

"Pa! I will try few of my new concoctions on them and then ditch them somewhere, they will be so confused that even remembering their own name will take days, so what happened today will disappear from their minds."

My instincts kicked in and I quickly grabbed the person I bumped into, who was just about to crash into the floor. I let go of there and and apologized hurriedly.

.. Anyway I had just finished watching Naruto and was attempting a summoning jutsu

'When will she meet her, in which part of this world is she in'.

Coming back from the mountains after picking wild vegetables, Mu Zheng saw Xiao Jia muttering in front of the door and without looking, he already knew who had arrived.