Well it's my first time reviewing, so if there is any grammar mistake pls forgive me. well for the first6 chapters it will be not that good but after that the novel is awesome. Read it
Author, this is a compelling story. I love Larry and Garry. Your characters are well developed and the world around them. They are living, breathing and claiming their world. Great world building!I have seen a Black Mirror episode with a similar plot but without the teddy. The teddy is so unique. So I can definitely see this story as TV series or an anthology. Please continue to write. Great job so far!
Shin Feng attempted to merge with these thoughts so he let them attack his conscious exposed. He then relaxed his mind but the thoughts kept raging in his mind. He tried to sit down but he could barely move his legs so he kept standing. His conscious battled with the wicked thoughts. After five straight hours, Shin Feng's conscious won against the evil thoughts.
I eventually turned my head, a beauty was directly at my bedside. Her face was contorted in worry, pink quivering lips and brown eyes that glistened from the room's white lights. Her skin tone was golden brown reflective streaks down her otherwise flawless cheeks; this waking image stuck with me as I once more lost consciousness.
Finally, 20 seconds later, he attacked back. He easily dodged the fists from the giant zombie, while also dodging a kick sent by it, and smashed his baseball bat at the forehead of the giant zombie, smashing it in.
it gets very wierd at later chapters with clone and stuff. Basically clone NTR as clones have their individual soles and stuff.Also MC is very unlikeable , simp and staying within his sister's garsps. The whole novel give NTR vibes sorry :(
I absolutely love this novel. The way the author captures the characters' struggles and inner thoughts is so vivid, it feels like you’re experiencing it yourself. I just hope the updates come more regularly!
