I Tried to stay afloat by all possible means, but the water did not show to be one of the dangers, if not the rocks that came out of the walls, ceilings and the same floor of the cave, my body ignored all the peaks of rocks until that at some point in front of me appeared a huge whirlpool that began to suck me towards its center, my life was about to end.
They visited the mesh hall, armory, training field, and many more places. Their last stop was the strange hole in the big circular room Jaimy had seen earlier. As he carefully looked down he was astonished with what he saw. The tunnel went down for around 5 meters before suddenly disappearing. At the other side all he could see was blue, however, it seemed to move with flashes of white every now and then.
Really enjoyed your opening! It is so nerve-wracking and exciting! Can't wait for more updates! Amazing right from the start! Love the way you craft your stories and how you end them on such a suspenseful tone!!
I can't continue reading without writing a review. Oh my gosh! are you a professional novelist? your novel is so amazing that I can't help but read it continuously! I love ittttttttttt
The beginning was interesting, but the author doesn't know how to carry the story, it got to a point where it became very boring and there are more than 50 chapters in which the MC doesn't appear and there are only secondary stories, it has the harem tag but in 200 chapters no one has appeared, in one chapter he says one thing and then completely changes it in the next.A lot of wasted potential.Don't waste your time reading, it's not worth it.
