The classroom laughed amidst a chorus of ("not uhh's") and ("yeah right's"). Minako crossed her arms and shook her head, making a 'tsk tsk' sound. She swore a look of disappointment crossed the Hyūga's features.
Forgive my interruption my lord the seven noble clans are waiting for your command, said sebrac the messenger of the pure blood king. Alas it's time for the war to begin, said lord Ryon has he headed out to start the battle.
story suffers from a lack of flow, it's very event to event based, and it's hard to read at certain points do to sentence structure not being the best. fights can be hard to imagine and as stated above with the event to event based reading it feels like details are left out at certain points. still think its worth reading it's just rough
