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What happens when you have no potential. What happens when everyone has such high expectations, only to be disappointed. What happens when you are so weak that even your soul takes the form of a slime. You will get cast out, spit on, hated, laughed at and pitied.

I can't take the contempt and pity anymore. I'm done with those disdainful stares and hateful whispers behind my back. Even if I need to twist my body and break my mind, I will go forward. Even if I have to corrupt my very existence, I will do it. I will gain power and will not stop until I'm on the top.

This is my first novel. I intend to complete it. English is not my native language, I will always be grateful if you point out any mistakes I made. Comments and feedback are always welcome as long as they are constructive. Also have some mercy with the ratings, this is my first novel so I'm still in the process of improving my style.

I hope you enjoy!

Edit: also if the picture does not conform with copyrights I will immediatly take it down when asked.

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Great writing. Zack annoying but we’ll see where it goes
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update please! I'm waiting for the 2nd part of the story ...
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Author when will update?
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Writing is confusing so far. The plot isn't, it's been overdone, storytelling lacks finesse, needs some editing. It appears there will be two stories, the MFC and her brother's story. I don't care for multiple stories in one book. Write one, then a separate book for the other. Only read to chapter 7
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finally I can read book 2 of sinful temptations all about Rasmus....
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