After reading your book I found it very interesting and i love the flow in the writings it make me feel like Dr.Stone Continue writing hope you'll cook more interesting chapters later on
Cover page is attractive. Concept or theme is really unique. Writing quality is nice as well. Plot seems hooking. So ,5 stars. I would recommend author to add a few figure of speechs and it'll add more colours in the piece. Super work author.
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Forty minutes passed, Viltus already on his way to his office again. On his way there, he just notices that the sign to show the name of the Admiral at each office are being replaced by a number. He then mumbles,
very 'NICE' story, the MC is being pampered by this loving slime girl, there's some thing going on with a strange cult thing, this seem very interesting ? and I'm giving this review to motivate the author, this is a great novel man.?
I don’t really no what to say. I stopped on chapter 6 because it went from before the Mikaelsons became the Original Vampires to present day New Orleans with no explanation on a time skip. It’s as if chapters are missing which led to my confusion on what is even going on.
