Skeptic Loyalties - Reviews

"He will be taken to the church and executed too, what are you trying to get what, " said the girl with a little impatience.

She felt his heat as he stood behind her. How am I supposed to think with him so close? The scent of him filled her nostrils creating a warm sensation between her legs. I thought that part of me died. Perhaps it has been too long? The kiss was just a fluke.... right?

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'How?'

Power: Has special eyes (it's vague, I know), can shape shift (some of his powers were taken away since he was banished from hell so he mainly takes the form of a cat, can't really do much shape shifting though) and he can use magic and has some unknown powers as well that is yet to be revealed. This is irrelevant to powers but he's also a charmer. (Good looks and all) He looks fit but doesn't gym.

Chapter 1

Hey dear author Your book resonated deeply with me, and I'm convinced it can inspire many more readers. I'd love to share some ideas on how to expand its reach and amplify its impact.May I have the privilege of discussing my thoughts with you?

yes, good but need something more, but the writer just started Let's see how you end