Silver Death - Reviews

Great story author,but you kinda killed it with the whole system thing for me,I mean there's at least a thousand system novels out there and alot of them are prolly better than yours (no offense btw) so I just think it would have been alot better if you hadn't added the system part but nevertheless still a great story ?Btw,I haven't read your story that far so I may have been a little bit stingy with the stars ?

the story stsrt like slow but when you read it it not feel like ery good but it little good if you just read it once more and always give a review after reading it and it help me to write a better story and thanks foe support me