Serangan Balasan Ibu Tiri: Membesarkan Anak di Era yang Telah Berlalu - Reviews

Serangan Balasan Ibu Tiri: Membesarkan Anak di Era yang Telah Berlalu
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I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed
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Add to the Harem: Daenerys Targaryen, Sansa Stark, Margaery Tyrell, Myrcella Baratheon, Arianne Martell(Make her still 'Pure', keeping your V card.).......HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM.......
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Hello everyone, I am proud to start posting this story for the Rising Star II competition, I invite you to immerse yourself in this work which takes the time to evolve its character and also... its little frogsNB : little idiot will have several fellow amphibians and if you are enough to comment regularly you will be able to decide what kind of frog will appear later
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Honestly really nice.Besides the grammar errors, and the lack of dialogue (which is made up for by all the infor we're given), it has a really cool start.The author could try mixing all of the background information while advancing the plot though.

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