Senten no Sephirot City - Reviews

Bless : Well then.

"I am glad that you are coming back with us." Shen Ya responded happily.

"If the two of you still continue you will have no breakfast today"

Yuuichi: "Rain, I can walk myself."

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

I like medieval type stories so I might be biased when I say I like it but I really do. I really like the MC's name (Ethan Cross) as well, little details like this can really be intriguing. But something to improve on is the spacing in the paragraphs, some felt a bit long which can make things feel a bit draggy so I recommend just starting on new lines if it feels too much

Found this by accident. I'm really excited to read this after finishing another book I've just found!

This is the definition of Peak, love the characters (apart from Aziroth), love the world building and character development (apart from everything concerned with aziroth), Love the writing (apart from every word starting with A and ending with H) :]

THANK YOULOVE IT, love it sooooooo much. Please make more, when or if you can of course.It's a shame it's a bit short as it's one of my favorites.