Second Chance for the Alpha - Reviews

I see great potential in this novel. The characters come together nicely, and the story development seems to be there, which always feels good for the novel in the long run. Many xianxia based novels released right now, but somehow I feel this one to be the greatest of them all.

I'm a silent reader whose very well hooked up with this story. My first time giving a review to a story to show my full support with 5 stars. Can't wait for more updates!! U P D A T E S. Need more updates please ????

Awful novel ...Logic is thrown out the window like MC bought close combat weapons even tho he only uses a sword ...Bomb suit apparently cheap and even tho bomb suits are heavy weight suits he can move without any difficulty ?Ight im out of here MDAAV is so much better

I'm going to be honest as ever, as I would expect everyone else, who isn't a bot, to do the same. The story isn't good, but it's not bad. The grammar isn't good, sometimes you don't even know who's talking. You also have numerous sentences inside a quote without a break. I'm not a professional neither is many people. But I know those who are giving five stars saying it's the best novel they've ever read is straight up lying. I don't know if you've run this over with a grammar checker or use the money you get and get an editor; But the grammar and the story telling is off. I'm not trying to be harsh here. I believe this could be an insanely decent story (Although I'm not a fan of girls in covers for a story that has nothing to do with them) ; Clickbaiting etc (I dislike it,) but this story has a chance to be decent. Why not look at the reviews, ask people what can be done. That is what this is here for!

One of the best......                                                                                                                                    

The woman, now about six meters away from the coffin, looked with a look full of hatred and resentment to Indra.

Aladin: Naalala ko talaga Ang mga istatus Ng Dark Side, Hindi pang karaniwan Ang kanilang kakayahan at kapangyarihan.. Lalo na Ang halimaw na anak Ni Jemie… Kailangan sa kanya mismo manggaling Kung kaninong anak nga ba Ang Ephraem na Yun.. Halimaw sya!!

"I am Ares," Ares spoke out from beside Bellona, tongues of flame creating a flowing mantle around him. "Son of Zeus, War God of the Ancient Era, embodiment of the Physical Aspects of War! I Am War Itself."

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

With the silence of the class, Mamat begin to read the prayer.

First found this wunderbar story over on reddit, nice to see it has spread to webnovel. The beginning sets you with a relatively peaceful outlook on the Commando's recovery from a lifetime of war,, but that doesn't last for long when the twist comes and turns the story upside down. It's a pretty fun read, give it a try.