Sci-fi short stories - Reviews

They've thought as they've groaned then blew their hands when it turned flaming red. The first guy looked back at the young man.

Tyre nodded, "He should have died."

    "I don't know too, we just followed Maya here. Apparently, she wanted to take a hike all of a sudden until we saw them getting tied up by you."

The butler quickly fetched the doctor and the doctor came running downstairs. He used a stethoscope to check her heart rate.

So much to do, so much to see

I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed

I really love how different this concept seemed to me. From the beginning u can tell dt drama is truly about to unfold. Looking forward to seeing mysteries getting unveiled and how Zara will get  out of all this. Really hoping to see her live no matter what☺️☺️☺️???

Perfect writing, portrayal of characters. I enjoyed reading from first till last. Everyone should give this a try!

With some world building and charcter design it can be improved. with this speed of story progression it feels more like Ai generated.

It's a good novel and does have quite a lot of potential. Seems like this mc primary goal is to have a huge harem first and formost so if you dislike huge harem, then prob skip it but otherwise you can give it a try.