great story I just wish I knew if it is harem. he has met and interacted with a total of maybe 3 guys. I don't particularly care either way but it is odd because with this focus it almost seems really weird when you have 9 different girls all around with some having flirty and cheap characteristics. then all of a sudden he is drawn to one and just flat out mentions the others aren't important to him, which is fine but then why make them all the same temperament and introduce them the exact same way. I am terrible at names anyway so I can't remember what one she was much less what she's done and can do. I guess the biggest flaw i have found is that the characters grow but they all grow the same . I can hardly tell the difference from each character which either stems from inexperience from either me or the author or is used to establish a harem. honestly one of the few where I would specifically recommend harem due to the corner that you have written yourself into with the at least 5 separate women that are all stingy and half are flirty and the rest are just blunt. regardless keep up the good work hope you can find a good ground and escape the corner.
