1. The name Julien feels a bit strange to me, and it's inconvenient to read (I’m reading through a browser with Google Translate translating the novel into my native language since the app translates incredibly poorly and sometimes deletes paragraphs of text during translation. After translation, the name looks like a hard-to-pronounce French name). I hope the character is called something else later on; it’s not a big problem, just an inconvenience. 2. A damn cliffhanger in chapter 4—moments like these are why I leave novels until at least 100 chapters have accumulated. 3. So far, I like the plot, especially the fact that he didn’t pretend to be that woman’s son from the start. That’s a huge plus. 4. I’m one of those who read "VSOL" up to the ongoing chapters, and I enjoyed it. I’m waiting for the continuation, and I’m really glad the author isn’t abandoning that novel to start this one.
