The reasoning and explanation for actions are strange, and the story don't make sense. she is not 18, but go to college. She gets a scholarship to college form a waitresses job?
Finished it in a couple of days, money well spent! The story is so good and it's very well written. It never gets boring or tedious to read, some stories are dragged out to the point I lose interest, but not this one. I really recommend it.
