Rise of the Vamper

Uniquely different and interesting to read. From the first chapter, I am captivated by the story and want to see it to the end.

the author doesn't know how to portray the character and is very naive.                                                                                    

At first the main character acts stupid and reckless as if he can take on the world but he does end up learning respect and learns to not just self destruct his own body every freakin time he fights. Overall it is a pretty good story. Minimal grammar issues and good plot

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"I..." he started talking. "I am a sailor, a navigator. I am lost for so many years in the sea of despair. Even if this life of mine was at its last stop, I will never give up my way again. I will travel land and sea, showing those who lost their bearings the path."

What was happenings. My domain was basically indestructible.