Revolution Of The Protagonist

This would have easily been a nice story line but it's not beautifully written...
the author seems to always mix up names and get the story confusing before It falls in line again.

Please proof read. you can do better.

The story started out interesting, but the last 10-15 chapters seem to move too slow, you’re slowly losing me.  I need to fill chapters with less fluff and more relevance, especially if you’re releasing 1 chapter a day.  I don’t want to give up on this book!

story is getting interesting day by day...

They all are a big mafia and plotters who plot against everyone for money and fame. These loser authors who make different new ids and promote them with their old one should not think of them to be so smart. This is a plagiarized book and everyone supporting it is a loser and a cheater.