Rejected Mate (English) - Reviews

" Yeah.. Daddy and am happy with you because you are both mommy and daddy

This stinging is only getting worse. An infection waiting to happen. I can't stop myself. Why can't I stop. I can't go any further. I've dug my flesh out all the way to the bone. I can feel it but I cannot see it. As I try and scratch my bone more and more blood floods in the way. How is an itch this powerful I go all the way to the bone? Scratch. Scratch. Scratch.

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

"How specious the foyer looks and staircase is neat and clean,  I think uncle's  Inn must be affordable for some high society people only" Lia was leisurely strolling while thinking this but in moment it wrecked.

"It can't be a coincidence that this Ultron has the Mind Stone in his grasp and that his underling would show you a glimpse of it. Clearly it is significant." Amora surmised, "What is truly vexing is this vision of a blinded Heimdall prophesizing the end of Asgard."

The potion has a shiny gold color and shines like all other potion.

Good start and story. If author just cuts the sentences into several pieces and sometimes use comma, it will be great. I’m just assuming it hasn’t gone popular yet because it hadn’t been published for long and the author hasn’t gained enough exposure.

Very talented Author. I can already see this novel as top 10 in a few years.

Its plot is excellent, truly engaging, and filled with many splendid scenes that are depicted very well. The characters are beautifully crafted. I believe this is going to be a great story. Keep going! ?