The story is good but it's going too fast. The story from the start, started to go at fast-pace. The mc should at least have a memory flashback about his family, fiancée, his academic life at the start. So you should either write auxiliary chapters to add the lacking information or start the novel again. Otherwise the plots of this novel feels forced. I hope you don't mind my opinion, I wrote this review because this novel has the potential to become more good. So, I hope you will consider my suggestions.
