Reincarnation ~ From the Upper World to the Lower World - Reviews

Only shooting stars

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

Jester clicked his finger and suddenly all the equipment and ingredients appeared  in front of him.

Hello, this is Author's review at Ch 432.There have been a few changes from how I wanted the novel to be when I started writing it, 18 months ago. If you are okay with spoilers, you can continue to read. These are the few things the readers can expect from Vol. 6.1) MC will stay as OP as ever2) MC finally moves from a good and naive fellow to a grey character, although his actions lean toward lesser evil from time to time, at least if seen through the lens of a third party.3) MC gets back to his original timeline at Ch 421.4) No Harem but cannot promise that he will stick to one girl until the end. It depends entirely on the flow of the story.5) He will constantly make time travel to the past and the future, all over the novel, but they will be short trips, not like the one that dragged until Vol 5.6) The gods from Greek mythology, Angels, Elves, and gods or characters from other mythologies will also make their appearance. However, please treat them like Marvel or DC characters.7) Tournaments lasted quite long until now. In future chapters, even if there are any tournaments, I'll try my best to increase the chapter length on battles and lessen the number of chapters instead.8) For those who have yet to start, I remind you that characters in the novel can live for hundreds or thousands of years. So, the earlier 1000-year headstart doesn't mean that MC is dead. He is only missing.9) As for when we will get to Year 3015 when the story starts in the first chapter, it can only depend on the flow of the story. I, the author has no draft prepared beforehand. I just write the chapter on a daily basis and upload it on the same day.10) Time Traveling is still a fictional concept to mankind. So, I don't need to follow the same rules displayed in some popular novels, tv series, or movies with time travel. Please be understanding even if the author's logic doesn't make sense to you.11) Last but not least, I use English as a third language and I don't have any editor or translator. If there are mistakes in grammar, please correct me through paragraph comments.* Thank you *

Good at writing, very regularly updates, fine at characters and world setting, good plots, but the story is too short.                                

the only 5 stars was Character Design.Because it describes what I was visioning myself.

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Nice book..Has a lot of potential. Upload more chapters

I feel like anything with System in the title should be a tad bit faster paced than this, but since I'm not sure about the entirety of the author's vision, I'm assuming it's necessary build up.That said, even though the story is a bit slow to reach the system part, I think the author does well to keep the readers engaged. The relatability of Jack Anderson's life is one thing that I feel can retain the attention.His bad luck and rotten living conditions with only the slight sweetness offered by Kelly as the love interest was enough to keep me reading. While the quality of the writing could use some work (quite a bit of it, actually), it's readable, but I urge the author to aim higher. There is a nice story to work with here, but I do fear that some readers might feel betrayed by the pace.Good work though

Bro, ngl, the author cooked, served, ate, and left no crumbs.bro ate the entire plate. I’m not gonna be surprised if bro actually eats the plate irl.