Reincarnated Into Sci-Fi Game World And Given System

I can give five in it... the story is really catchy plus this is the first time i've read an earialist story..so i was pulled in, craving for more on it... Nice story author??? Keep it up!

I hv started reading this and find the flow of chapters a bit disjointed. Not really liking how the Male and Female lead's characters develop. Finding Shane a bit of a scumbag with no conscience... and Audrey needs to be a bit more firm and confident abt her decisions.

"You can say what you want, think what you want and feel what you want but it will not stop me from coming to see you!"