Reclaiming His Slave Mate - Reviews

After reading the first couple of paragraphs I can tell that the content of the original novel in Chinese uses imagery to great effect in the style of high fantasy. However from reading in English I can see that the person who is translating doesn't not do the subject matter justice. Writing in third person omniscient and using complex imagery is very difficult. We can see how the translator fell short, his is just doing the literal meaning translation instead without considering how the prose flows together in English. Instead we have a disjointed prose that jumps around presumably keeping up with the Chinese meaning but fails to live to the quality of the imagery or how the narrative flows. Please choose a translator that is a better writer

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Ram planted his hooves in the grass, "It is referred to as Magic."

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this story fortunately was always ment to be short.

I want more chapter

A few minutes later, an exhausted Nazariy arrived in a large garden full of lush vegetation, which included large bamboo stalks, willow trees, and flower bushes. There were even many decorative ponds sprinkled throughout that contained fish lazily swimming about.

But this time, I can say for sure, that it will be different.

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The barrier to the stadium shattered like glass and a red figure slammed down into the ground, kicking up a large amount of dust and debri.

Rei was currently in his private tent one of the many benefits of being the son of the clan head, after having a full healthy meal he as usual set down Cross-legged on his bed meditating.

The slimes were really the only threat here. Not because they did much health damage but because they actually did durability damage. This meant these little jellies could dissolve your clothes if they attacked you! If your armour durability reached zero you'd have to walk to the first town without the luxury of a covered body.