Reborn as a Cyborg - Reviews

Posting my review again since my previous review is basically not visible to some of my reader friends. Anyways, I'm a long time webnovel reader of like 6 years and really liked the way this one has started off. Can't e bothered to recollect everything else I wrote the first time tbh, you see the 5 stars I gave it

It just isn't very good and the character make no sense what so ever, and the very law of time travel is simply "If you travel back in time to do something then that something you traveled back in time to do will never have existed thus you would never have traveled back in time to do it" paradox.

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When he tried to climb back to bed last night, instead of a warm blanket greeting, instead he got a kick to his stomach. 'Your skin is so goddamn cold kid. Don't touch me.' He knew that time spent arguing would beg no results; it wasn't the first time that skeleton kicked him off. So he created a temporary mattress out of yesterday's clothes — sprinkled with winter chill, stink, and dust.

Ketidakpeduliannya mengejutkanku lebih dari kata-katanya. Apakah dia benar-benar tidak peduli?

"Oh, shut up," Renji replied as he leaned against the closet before his face took on a serious look. "I got a strange message on my soul pager. I mean the spiritual pressure isn't all that strong, but you can feel that can't you?" Renji asked causing Ichigo to begin and try to sense what Renji was talking about before he shot of bed with his eyes widen.

"yes! i've finished it all although its a fast reading i already know the basics because of my experience as a secretary i wonder what my boss looks like... is he handsome.... "

At this moment, Di Xiangtian had a thoght of getting out. At the time it took an eye to blink, he already found himself, lying in his bed.

"Yes! Maybe the prettiest girl in the entire Red Jade continent," a woman next to him commented.

Short time later she is already on the way again.

Taking a few calming breaths he stared off into space.

At one moment, Parch gently started raising her hand and forming a question, but it was quickly suppressed.