Rebirth: Rise of the Slave Master

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The writing quality is some next level ****, author does a very good job with grammar, general story telling, and the speed at which the story moves forward, not too fast and not too slow. From reading the first few chapters alone you can tell that this author not only has writing experience, but that he puts that experience to good use. The stability of updates so far is great especially for a side project, however it’s still quite early to tell for sure and I can only hope that the author will keep up with this as time goes on. Story development is quite good so far, not too fast or too slow, however this is another one of the things that only time will truly tell. Character design is interesting, an MC that is simply an average person is becoming more and more scarce and I think it can bring out a lot of interesting further development as he must face issues he may never have even considered in his average lifestyle and grow from these experiences. World background is presented very well, unlike the info dump that most simply default to, it’s presented slowly and in an interesting fashion that explains the general world while still keeping the readers interest. All in all, a damn good story.

"Not really, but just some tedious tasks." Nobunaga said while rubbing his eyes. "Are we still on for this afternoon?" He asked. Since Harumi had been abducted and Nobunaga found out the truth about her he had decided that Harumi should learn some selfdefense, even though she officially wasn't aloud to learn that. Nobunaga had one condition, he was the one that would teach her. So for the last couple of weeks they had been training together for two to three times a week.