Rebirth of the betrayed Luna - Reviews

So many grammatical errors, names spelt wrong even within the same paragraph.

This book is all over place, it’s quite hard to keep up, the writing style is messy so you really have to concentrate to follow.

Lacks strong character development too.

Repeating chapters, wrong names used, timelines everywhere- not a smooth reading book.  Seems very erratically written.  Could be good storyline- but jumps all over the place.

is it good

are you Ashborn1609?

Ok , novel is good...I read 100 chapters... conclusion- even a smart AI is in awe of magic and trying to learn magic.

Nice story but why is the update so slow

oh my!  cliff hanger again